Garbage

First off, FIX THE DAMN AUDIO! I mean come on is it that hard to put your voice a little closer? What about that one guy that put it too close and was loud as hell, and the Ahh was unnessary i didn't watch it all it bored me to death..Fix your audio and work on graphic and you'll be good to go :).

0/5

Your lack of skill is saddening... :(

On the brighter side you have lots of room for improvement!

yay!

interesting

The voices were seriously distorted and hard to understand. Trying to hear them over ... who was that, Whitesnake? ... didn't help matters any, either.

Intro: Seemed to drag on for way too long The Sherman & Mr. Peabody cameo might have been a bright spot if only I could have understood what the heck anyone was actually saying.

Enzyme action: Meh. Close enough for grade school. I'll give you a break on this one.

Text portion: AAAH IT BURNS IT BURNS! I had to stop watching here because the spelling errors were making my brain bleed. You did this as a school project, and you didn't check your spelling??

Overall: nice update of the "clear plastic binder" approach (the rumor when I was in school was that putting your report in a fancy binder would raise your grade by at least a +/- mark, because, hey, it HAD to be good if it was in a BINDER).

confused

Oh man, come on! Enzymes are interesting things, but this is totally messed up everything. The voices are hard to understand, too.

a mess

It is an interesting idea doing a science lesson but in this case it doesn't really work. For a start the sound was rubbish even concentrating I didn't catch it all. It also needs to be edited, if you want it to about science (which is good) cut out a lot of the other stuff. To be honest though you didn't seem to want it to be that sciencey as you just threw in some science facts in the middle as text, if it is going to be about science you need to make the science parts clearer (perhaps don't personify the enzymes) and link them into your plot more. The final criticism is that a lot of the humor is just not funny, in my opinion it pays to avoid that school kid sarcastic humor (or only use small amount of it) as it is only funny in the context of being with your friends at that time and is hard to do well (TDofVG's being perhaps an exception) so try and make the humor as general as possible. So if you are serious about doing this flash well 1)Sound, 2)plot 3)humor, otherwise hope you had fun, and good on you for giving it a go.