Hmm.
Ya know, it's pretty alright, but your interface isn't friendly(no idea what to click on), the loader seems unneeded, and I don't really want to see what looked like your flash homepage.
Author Comments
this is newtonmeyer the first of a hopefully successful series
sum 1 flagged this the first time i duno who
o and if u just dont like it.. dont flag it
blam it
Very good
Very good flash. I liked it. Very unique as already said. Length is short but not that important so don't worry about it. Very funny good work.
I lol-ed.
Pretty funny. The only real problem I had with this flash movie was the length. If you made it a minute or two longer this would be a favorite. Good job with the flash and good luck on future ones.
Almost There
I'm probably echoing all the other reviews by saying this, but I'm sure you'll live.
Just brush up your character drawings a bit, work on developing the humor a bit more, and maybe design a plotline. Other than those, you seem to be one the right path.
pillowbasher responds:
thanx for the review at least this one could help me instead of just saying wat i did wrong u told me how to fix it
THANX!
Not too bad
Needs some work. I liked the graphic style and theres nothing wrong with a random flash, but it needs a bit more to it. Try to add a bit more humor next time. Good job though, keep it up.