i liked it.
Pretty good. Normally i woulden't have been drawn to something called Aeonneo but this was pretty good.Keep up the good work.
Author Comments
If I was asked to give a meaning for this flash I would say that I wanted people to enjoy the present and work towards a better future, because time is not endless. I believe this flash is one of the best flashes I have done to date, this is probably the darkest flash as well. I don’t know about you but I love the music. Well please take the time to give me a review. Thanks - Warto
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WARNING: May contain Nuts
not bad
it was alright, pretty random overall, but it was okay to watch.
WARTORIOUS responds:
Thanks man, Im glad you took the time to riview!
roflc oo
coo. thanks for adding me as a favorite ROFL. your the ONLY one. o.o
WARTORIOUS responds:
Thanks
grammer!
that was ok, but work on your grammer a bit, k? it had an okay plot but.... just a little cheezy and such.
WARTORIOUS responds:
The ”grammar” at the start dose kind of slap you in the face a bit, Thanks for the advice there, I can understand why you would call Aeonneo “a little cheesy” but I respectfully disagree
Spell Check
Decent Plot, but if you are going to use text to explain it... or introduce it, please check your spelling and gramar.... 'Their' not 'there' in "Human complacency will be there downfall" ... the setance after that is a fragment... and "... so we will take it off them." <makes no sense really...
Yes it is nitpicky, but little things like that make all the difference.
WARTORIOUS responds:
Thanks for the point, but you should look beyond spellings, Shakespeare himself make up more works than you can shake a spear at! - ok, crappy joke ^__^