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This is my first work in flash. I hope you'll like it : ) Enjoy.

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((( NEEDS WORK )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was ok but could use some work, more detail and more time into the flash, filesize was notbad but could be abit better, just a few things to work on...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More effort, more time with characters and giving a better flow of anumation, and more detail like in the backrounds it wouldnt hurt and would probably improve on the flash...

~~OVERALL~~
An ok flash but clearly needs abit of work, nice job...

~X~

Good for a first time

Keep going you can only get better with practice

POLsKA!!!!

ok graphics could of been better

okay

the music was pretty good for this animation, although i found this one to be very random. your efforts in it were good though, so im not dissing it.

GREAT MUSIC....NOT SO GOOD MOVIE!

IT WAS OK BUT REALLY POINTLESS...BUT I LOVED THE MUSIC!!

Credits & Info

Views
2,013
Votes
11
Score
3.22 / 5.00

Uploaded
Sep 8, 2005
12:03 PM EDT