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~~REVIEW~~
This is decent, i like how the story playsout, it has a cetain humor value aswell, the charater is notbad could have more depth though as for the flash its notbad, i hope to see more soon...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The Filesize was massive almost killed my machine, i use 56k and im sure alot of other users do aswell and something to think about when making really big flashworks and the filesize is that big think about the user abit as they might not beable to download as some people may be impatient, compress it abit or cut it down somehow but remember that alot of us use 56k.
~~OVERALL~~
A good flash nice story and funny, could be a series...
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