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A diary of a spooky little fetus ! yay !
I'm pro-choice, so my rating may be a bit bias, but isn't it possible that it was God's/high power's plan for it to die? Couldn't the mother have been fulfilling High Power's will? Well there's no way to know, and there probably isn't any higher power anyway, so whatever
Also, there were some sloppy mistakes like "dev' instead of 'dec' and I'm a grammar nazi....
i like the origional idea but i dislike the message, it's a woman's own choice and hers to make. don't force people into stuff they don't wanna do. it's bullying and peer pressure.
i like the art and the way you made it flow along smoothly. the sound was in sync.
good job on the animation.
I think that you are trying to make a statement, but I can't quite put my finger on what you are trying to get across...
to be honest...
Not my favorite. the animation was alright, not choppy or anything, but the style was just... a bit below average. The music was a good choice, however.
The subject matter, of course... You have to be either completely serious or completely comedic. if you stay on the fence about something like this, not many people will like it, and for good reason.
True, if you make it comedic, you'll have plenty of haters, but you'll also get people that like the jokes. This had no jokes.
All in all, it was kind of pointless. there wasn't really a message, at least, not one that was clear. I guess you could say you were trying to be anti-abortion, but it was still pretty trite. bring something new to the table, maybe it'll be better.
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