Very nice, especially for a first submission.
Very well done for a first time submission. You could see that effort actually went into this. Decent graphics, flowing action, music/sound well timed, and an adequate story to boot! It was nice to see that you thought about the slower readers out there and let the viewer choose when to procede to the next section of dialog. Look forward to future efforts from you.
I am very impressed!!
If this is your first flash ever, this is EXCEPTIONAL. If you've worked on some other things, but this is your first submission, I still think it's good. The animations were good, good sound effects, and music. I see you have a bright future here, keep it up!!
First Flash eh?
Good stuff...in the future you might want to think about voice acting.
it was ok
This movie was aliright it is better than my movies i make........
Your flash skill is almost frightening...