i am a beginner Flash user and i want people to see what I've been through. this animation is 1 episode and has 2 chapters in it. i know the quality is bad but thats all i know how to do. I just want to express my feelings to viewers. there will be some that wont like the animation cause its cheap or whatever but thats how everyone starts... if you want me to make better animations sent me a tutorial on how to use SWiSH 2.0... thats what i use. email me @ Porateku@yahoo.com
Thanks for watching and god bless you all
Sad Story
It was an interesting sad story. you did good for your first animation. i cant say i have gone thru this but it seems like your one of the many ppl who have gone thru stuggles since an infant, hope life is better for you as an adult. your new upcoming witness animation seems interesting,hopefully this time is better then the frist time with better graphics. hope to see it soon.
Good!
A beginner at flash you say? I don't believe, heh, this is pretty impressive stuff. Graphics and animation aren't the best, you could make the lines smoother, improve shading, etc, but the concept is good and it seems like you spent quite some time on this as well. It was worth watching, looking forward to seeing more stuff by you! Keep up the good work!
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((( NEEDS WORK )))
~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad for a first and seems that you do have some skills with flash but still needs abit more to it, more ideas aswell and some compressing aswell...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You may want to compress the file as it was abit larg and for users with 56k such as myself might have issues with downloading the file, just something to think about when the file gets that big.
~~OVERALL~~
An ok flash but you need some more detail and effort, nice try...
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Thank you for your opinion if you have any more pointer, lease let me know them. I would like to know how to make better animations so let let me know how to use a software that you'd recommend. I use SWiSHmax and I see that it takes upm too much space for the 56k modem users..sorry
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It wasent the best it wasent the worst..but it was good for a first timer.better than average. with partice tis can be the next south park still of animation.keep the good work
Thanks a lot man. Hey, I'm making Ep.2 when I release it I will make sure you get a email so you can check it out.
Touching.. I feel for you!
WOW
when i first saw this i agreed with everyone else's crap about the graphics. But looking beyond all of that, the story really packs quite a PUNCH. This is a really good story, real or not its touching and sad.. I can relate to this myself.. You have very big balls to submit this to the public. I congratulate you!
P.S
Email me the other Episodes ASAP: Polatex2tm@comcast.net
If you can relate to this then you and I should talk sometime to see if we can collaborate. Thanks for your support and stay tuned for Ep.2.