good work

i like ur style, but sound could use an improvement, good work anyways

fifen

Could do better

This flash movie was...somewhat interesting. It would've been better if the characters had voices, and if it were a bit longer. You have some potencial, and I know you can do better. Keep working on your flash movies and I just know that one day you'll be on first page. =]

lol

if you start off with a love story and have a twist like that it's bound to be good

((( HEH )))

Heh the ending was neat, the "CHARACTERS" were very good, not to simple and and not too detailed, but just right heh, the flash could be better with some "VOICES" though but the music did ok, and that ending hehe nice job....

~X~

hahha

that was funny... u no that theres a section on ng where there are ppl willing to do voices for stuff... hehe "I killed them!!!" >=) insanity is fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuun!! WOOH *cough* *cough*um ya sorry....
the graphics could have been alot better.