Oki

Well it didn't turn out that great. First of all, the content is pretty simple. Most NG users who are interested in flash tutorials would probably be more interested in a tutorial taking up more advanced aspects of the flash world. The interface isn't the most proffesional either. My advice, learn flash, submit some animations/games etc, then make a good tutorial.

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^^Good Points^^
Well it was somewhat informative. A rather random tutorial, but it's an interesting animation at least.

^^Needs Improving^^
Really needs some work. As I said, this is a very specific subject, yet no one will ever find it if they are looking how to do this, since the title and description are useless to search for this subject. Anyway, the text thing could have been done in photoshop and probably some other more common programs than Fireworks, which I doubt most people have here.

((( ABIT CONFUSING )))

This was abit confusing it is the design of it all, somewhat sloppy and, if you set it up to be more view friendly and more presebtble like with borders and not everything so bunched up it might look better, nice try though, the tetris music was funny...

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not too good

Errrr... next time try making a tutorial for macromedia flash mx or something i dont think many ppl have macromedia fireworks

XD

I really enjoyed it. The music was also very nice. I hope you will do another tasteful tutorial in the future because this is one of the few I actually liked =D