Man this is some pretty funny shit oh yeah and really nice work on the graphics
Excellent artwork, your very talented. The final joke was... well... not really good, but still kinda funny! Keep it up!
The animation style and artistic talent were great. However i must say the storyline blew, the joke bombed, and it wasnt very funny. Some of the little things were funny, but the punchline at the end wasnt. Work out the written part more before animating your next one. .. However, i do definitely look forward to your next short.
Thanks for the kudos and the constructive crit! This was a toon I needed to get out of my system since it tested a lot of the things I had learned and discovered in Flash. After watching "Bye Bye Bunny", I'm sure you can relate. The jokes are there, but they just don't quite hit home.
he deserved it
That was good.
I have to assume that Nooser is a 6 year old, since he thought this movie sucked. He wanted a gun fight and action... Obviously he didn't understand that you don't need blood and guts to make a good movie. Only a 6 year old would insult a movie that someone took a lot of efort to make... I insult lots of movies but ussually they just plain suck... I'm not gonna give any names but certain-CLOCK!!!- movies really suck. Not all... But some.
Well... I thought this was a really good movie and I can't wait for more.