excellent
I wasnt sure at first, but then the story kicked in and sold me iin for the movie.
a point left?
well, animation could take a kick in
Author Comments
This is my second cartoon that I've released. It's a comedy about buisnessmen dealing with problems in the workplace. Most of it is based off of what I go through at work except my job isn't as important.=) Plz Support the series if you want to see more.
P.s. Check out my other cartoons=)
NIIIICE!
Simple animation and a great script makes for an easy enjoyable toon to watch...I loved it XD
Dude!!!
Classic ending! Good Job
I'm gonna check the other ones..
Good punchline
I liked it, good as far as most second submissions go! You need to find a style that sets your backgrounds and characters apart, something to make the faces more gritty, textured....but that comes with time and practice. I like the humour, but maybe focuses too much on each specific incident. corporate water cooler talk is more snippity, like two women talking shit to eachother but with much more subtlety! Great punchline though!
Haha that's nice!
Like the ending, i wuz wondering how he new THAT
Great flash, quality was perfect and voices that fit the characters well :)