I'd say the animation needs work but good background drawings..
Ps I realy like your description of an angel..
how.........how do u do it????well it doesn't matter how but u do do it and it's always great!!!!!!!!! 10/10 and 5/5.
Xander Burgess one day my children are going to go into a movie theater. and when they do you will have made a movie that won an oscar and my children will go to the movie theater to watch YOUR movie. And i will tell them i watched some of your earliest and most heartbreaking work.
you have Impressed me 6 times so far
A very interesting well animated and cool tale with a moral thingy...
also is it just me or does it remind you of some of the charecters in she smiled at me?
Errm. Yeah! Didn't see it myself.:)
...if not for the deadpan voices. I would have liked this without voices, just visual expressions on the characters. If you must have voices in this flash, at least put a little bit more expression in their words.
I do, however, love your transitions, not only with the animation, but with the music. Everything was very smooth, except for the ending. I would've liked that to have faded into silence, as the title image/logo faded in.
Fantastic job with this. I cannot wait to see more. :D