i understand the work that u put in this but that god damn static noise is aggravating redo it make it longer, funny, and take the damn static noise stuff out and alot of people will like it, peace
It was good and everything but it was way too short...and also I understand its a screen crew and everything but do you have to make that fuzzy weird sound that you put everything you jump from scene to scene? It's so annoying...I'll be fine with it if it wasn't for like more than 3-4 seconds yeah...
:( sorry. I'll try better next time. thanks for the review.
Seriously, THINK before you decide to use Locks.
I can accept that you're trying to make a serious flash, but if you ARE going to try it, at least get a non-Lock opinion before you submit. It was WAY too short, it had very little action to make up for its lack of comedy, and the traditional monotone voices just don't suit a serious venture.
Try looking at RenegadeClock's Clock Day 2005 submission, it's a perfect example of normal voices being used in a Clock setting, and it fits.
Plus, you haven't shown any members of the Screen Squad yet, which makes it hard for the viewer to accept that there's a real conflict in your little story. Once again, I can accept that you're trying to do a serious flash, but you're gonna have to work a little harder on the sequel if you want to keep anyone's attention.
Thanks for the review.
Ok, there were two things that I liked in the one. 1. The beginning. 2. The music. That was it, the whole lock thing was a turn off for me. if they were...oh I don't know...people...I think it would've been better. But seriously, why locks, it's just retarded. I was about ready to X out of it when it was at the other house with the TV on. Just...no...
Maybe you're retarted. Especially considering you enjoyed watching text scroll, and because of your inability to spell and use proper English. Thanks for the review.
The art work and effect is very good. The plot is also good. so keep up da good work.
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I like your name, very sexy. Thanks for the review.