not bad
pretty random overall, but the voice acting was pretty cool and the plot to it and the alter egos were good.
Author Comments
Starts out a little slow, but once the flashback scene comes, it picks up.
This is a pilot episode, hopefully we can figure what went wrong with this one and fix it for future episodes.
Couple Things:
There are not fart jokes, the teacher just farts.
Sorry there is not background music in every scene, trying to keep it under 5mb
Is it slow? i am sorry but once the flashback scene comes, it picks up a little.
And come on, theres a wopping 17 characters! well 9, but 8 have Alter Egos, thats alot of work to do, and the voice acting is pretty good.
jeremiah-castro responds:
Thank you.
this is just the pilot episode, so there didnt need to have a big story, just an introduction to what the characters are like.
Thanks you, oh and i love the voice acting to.
younger crowd
Since you ripped off the characters, you might as well have ripped off a soundtrack or two. Average graphics, but a little slow on the action. The farting came off more unsettling than funny. This may get a better reaction from a younger crowd (15 and under). Nice try, though. Keep trying!
jeremiah-castro responds:
I realize music might have helped a little. There is music in the flashback scene though.
The original original intent was a kid cartoon, but other people who worked on it tryd to write for an older audience, thank you.
not so funny
its not that funny
jeremiah-castro responds:
Yeh well, hopefully in a future episode i can unlock my humouse style better.
any thoughts on what would make it more funny?
Nice.
Good job. Twas a very funny and enjoyable flash movie. The part where Bruce turned into the hulk was quite funny.
jeremiah-castro responds:
Well thank you.
the part where he turned into hulk, i saved for last because i was avoiding doing it.
hehe
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jeremiah-castro responds:
what fart jokes? i don't think the word fart was ever used in this animation.