not bad
pretty random overall, but the voice acting was pretty cool and the plot to it and the alter egos were good.
Author Comments
Starts out a little slow, but once the flashback scene comes, it picks up.
This is a pilot episode, hopefully we can figure what went wrong with this one and fix it for future episodes.
Couple Things:
There are not fart jokes, the teacher just farts.
Sorry there is not background music in every scene, trying to keep it under 5mb
Is it slow? i am sorry but once the flashback scene comes, it picks up a little.
And come on, theres a wopping 17 characters! well 9, but 8 have Alter Egos, thats alot of work to do, and the voice acting is pretty good.
jeremiah-castro responds:
Thank you.
this is just the pilot episode, so there didnt need to have a big story, just an introduction to what the characters are like.
Thanks you, oh and i love the voice acting to.
