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Aug 24, 2005 | 10:49 AM EDT

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right i decided that a lot of complaints about it where the fact that it was on a white background i decided to change that and even though it may have not been too big a change that i made but i think it gives this film alot more mystory to it anyway hope you like it :D



Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Needs Better Pacing, Has Potential

The images go by too fast. Also there was a text frame that simply went too fast for me to read and I'm a fairly fast reader. I felt the music was out of place but instead of changing it, I felt that somehow you could make the events ever so slightly positive. For example: the character could be relieved and even happy that his suffering is going to be all over soon, which would make the music more appropriate and give the whole story a much more absurd and tragic tone than it has now. I loved the smiling dead woman; it was as if she was saying "It's ok, I forgive you," in death. I don't know if you meant it that way or not, but good job none-the-less.


Rated 4 / 5 stars

It's better but it's still a bit too short

I did really like this when I first saw it but I did think that it needen some improvement, you've improved quite alot of it but it's still a bit too short and the storyline is a bit vague. Good Job Anyway!
Oh and btw, I have become quite a fan of bloc party because of this movie, I wanna thank you for that!


Rated 2 / 5 stars

lighten up

and most NGers have the attention span of a goldfish so more animation less text please!


Rated 4 / 5 stars

Not Bad, I like ur spirit

I like the way you plot out your stoyrlines, I think your talent could be put better towards more educational features. I think if you progress this way you should really be able to reach out to people.


Rated 0 / 5 stars


No Story line at all pics were moving to fast ughhh blam it