I lke, like it
it is a good first chapter. the art is quite good, but I love the way you make look everything so dark yet anybody is still be able to see what is happening.
as for the animation, it seems to me you didnt put a lot of effort into it. maybe you didnt want to waste too much time on it. or maybe it isnt your forte.
over all I love it, it seems the beginning of a really good story. but you may try to find somebody with more enthusiasm for animation that can give you a hand.
It was a nice animation, there is just too much dragonball and sajajin stuff in it for my taste.
very nice animation
it was a good animation but, since it was during the night you could have had it thundering or something so that it is easier to see. Also why is that one knight able to blow up a whole castle while the other one dies by a knife being stabbed into the most armored part of his body. The last thing is that you could have had some fair fighting scenes instead of one guy owning everybody in seconds. sorry for writing so much bad stuff but writingall the good stuff would take to long.
Nyaa this is pretty kick ass. make more!!
Some of the animation was a bit static, but otherwise good. When Malagent starts using magic one of the defenders should have said something like "Foul sorcery!" or something, that would've been cool.