Well...
This film isn't brilliant, but this seriously doesn't deserve a 2/5 rating. The animation is too good for that.
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This flash movie is based on a dream that I had, and the ominous events that followed it. Although It's obvious that the dream was triggered by the reality physically, it's cool to think of it as a sinister portent. It is my second submission.
Edit: I spent some time today to fix timing issues, add voicovers, and added a few seconds to the fight scene.
Well heres what you should fix on that...
I agree with everyone else, the pacing is way too slow. you need to speed up the process. it was an ok flash, problem is that not really anything wasnt detailed enough. ive seen other great flashes here, and i know you can at least get a good paced flash going. focus more on detail and pacing. thats about all.
hmmm...
YOU RUINED IT! just joking it was hilarious voted 5
so...
What happened after you ate the muffin for breakfast? Or did it eat you?
0o0o0o0o *^_^*
Smooth..
I liked where it was like you had muffins the next morning..kinda strange =). Nice flash though.
