Where are his shoulders?
1. Spell check.
2. Have someone else proof-read your script to catch grammatical mistakes.
3. Seriously take flash lessons. Learn how to do simple human animations, make walking look like walking instead of having it look like a 2-D character shuffling around.
The reason people are busting your balls over grammatical mistakes? Your flash relies on text to tell the story, so everyone is reading it. If you used voices instead, and talk naturally, your flash will lose the sense of being created by an idiot. Or you could learn how to spell. Believe it or not, but literacy is a very important skill that will assist you in getting any job you might want or have to get.