One question...

Where are his shoulders?

1. Spell check.
2. Have someone else proof-read your script to catch grammatical mistakes.
3. Seriously take flash lessons. Learn how to do simple human animations, make walking look like walking instead of having it look like a 2-D character shuffling around.

The reason people are busting your balls over grammatical mistakes? Your flash relies on text to tell the story, so everyone is reading it. If you used voices instead, and talk naturally, your flash will lose the sense of being created by an idiot. Or you could learn how to spell. Believe it or not, but literacy is a very important skill that will assist you in getting any job you might want or have to get.

Not bad

Although it seemed a bit short, at the end, I thought that it should have been different, but again I am not the creator so..yeah
But anyways I want the music!!!! Someone lemmie know what it was!!!
Please!
akfootball_03@yahoo.com

Not bad

I was a little disappointed though as 3 quarters of it was the 2nd preview. Even so, I still enjoyed it and maybe you could make more out of it? Ignore comments based on your spelling, it's the only thing people seem to be picking up on, check your spellings and it seems as though they'll like it. Anways, keep up the good stuff.

pretty good

not bad, some of the animations are weak, but it is still good. also the text is small. good job none-the-less.

needs work

this movie could be good if it had voices instead of subtitles, and a little more direction.