Good Job!
Good job! I liked it. All of it was really good. I really liked the music. I like your style.
Keep up the good work!
Author Comments
This is a rework of my first flash "colourless" I have fixed the text problem and Audio problem, I have also added more scenes.
Not too bad
some scenes seemed to be drawn a lot better than others but overall it wasn't too bad. It kind of reminds me of my first. good work over all.
This is unique...
Haven't seem the old black and white movie talking fashion before...
Though I must say it's pretty good.
Keep up the good work
Hm
Grammatical errors aside ("I look at upon the world?") it's an okay piece of work. That being said, I think you need to put some more time and effort into these things.
Kironthen00binator responds:
Well my school assiment is due in ..... 6 hours and it's 2:00 AM here
good work
but you need to improve your animating skills. the story was hard to follow at first but after a while it became clearer; good job on this flash!
4/5
Kironthen00binator responds:
Yeah, I can do alot better, but after the critical review of my last episodes of "colourless" i decided to redo them, This is a school assiment and I started not any less than a hour ago remaking Colourless, now it is 1:55 AM and i'm quite proud of myself that I finished 1 episode in a hour at this time in the morning. I will fix up some of the animation later though.