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This was my school project they gave us 10 hours to do. It was simple: Make a Flash website or Flash movie. I chose a movie on a joke. I worked way to long on the artwork, so towards the end it gets a little quick, but all in all I think I did pretty well.

Despite that it has no sound.

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Sound?

I dont know if it was just me or what but there was no sound. I think it would be great with real sound. Fix that and then keep up the awesome work.

Good

It was all good, apart from the door at the begining. It was like an optical illusion! I couldn't tell whether it ws opening inwards or outwards! Apart from that, it was great!

I hate to give tens when I'm seriously reviewing.

I plan on writing out an explanation of each field to help you improve in the future. I don't think it will all show up, so I'll email you with the entire message.

Graphics
The only thing that irked me graphics-wise was the door. Otherwise it would have been a ten. The joke was a little shoddy, but you did it well. At least the beers helped the joke along. - 9

Style
I don't like having to click a button on the subtitles to move on. I'm a lazy American, so I want my humor in as few clicks as possible. Don't get me wrong, the flying pigs and the courage-o-meter were great uses of time. - 9

Sound
I don't expect you to have voice artists and a recording studio lined up in less than ten hours, but I wish there was at least some music. Can't rate what you don't have. - 0

Violence
The most violent thing was the screaming. I personally don't like screaming, and after a pretty weird childhood I'm skiddish about it, so I think it's violent enough for a one. - 1

Interactivity
It was great in that scale. You gave interesting choices in the plot with no major differences in the storyline... I like that. I hate giving tens, but this category was deserving. - 10

Humor
I didn't laugh. I love a good comedy, but it's hard to get me to all-out laugh. It made me smile, and I chuckled at the pity corner joke, but this was only higher than average, not excellent. - 7

Overall
It's hard for me to do this. Sure, I give flash creators that I like tens all the time, but that's only if they need the boost or I know them personally. For me to give someone a ten on overall and seriously mean it is a very rare occasion. Your teacher should be giving you an A on this project. - 10

It was funny!

Thanks man this is my 299 rewiew and i owe it all to you.

Yeah...that's right..

I think that the movie it's allright,it has good graphics and it's funny but why don't u try to put sound in next one?makes it a lot funny i think....