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This is page 3 of the comic, I had really nothing else to do so I spent all afternoon finishing this one.

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Nobodys Perfect

I remeber watching this when I was 9. I really liked it alot. I understand that you put alot of time and thinking into this and you deserve some credit. I love the music and pictures but the text was very hard to read. I had to keep pressing prnt scrn and pasting it on paint to read it. I hope to see the conclusion to this.

Keep Improving!

You need to improve your work.
And, I must agree with FLCLmonkey. You can't read the text at all.
It moves too quickly and it scrolls along the wrong way.

Well...

The story didni't seem very gripping, and the drawings were horrible. It definitely needed more animation other than scrolling text, but if thats all you know (knew, I clicked random submission and didn't look at the date this was released), then I suggest you go get some tutorials and practice your art.

2/5

cant read the subtitles

other than that it was good

Awesome, but improvement possible =)

Yeh legibility is a factor here, might wanna work on that. Otherwise awesome movie loved the dark style and went really well with the music. You should mess around and try to get scene changes to coincide with the distinctive beats in the filim.

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Votes
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Score
3.27 / 5.00

Uploaded
Aug 16, 2005
5:35 AM EDT