I was impressed by how long it was. I do wish there was Scene Select. That's usually a rule of thumb for something over five minutes long. This was still great. mrsimon, you are a great artist. I wish you, like most other people would submit new stuff here.
The animation was very good. You really are setting up a story. It's a pity it was never continued. The music got a little annoying. You could have muted it.