Time to begin another review...
I watched this movie from the link from the front page.
Anyways, you need to get rid of that audio, it makes the file size way too long for something so small.
Anyways, the sprites look ok, but a bit glitchey, the next button wasn't aligned, so you need to go to onion skin option to fix it and you can fine tune it by zooming it and using the arrow keys to move it around.
Next, it was too short to start off with, there was no story line, i don't know why they were figting or how they know each other. And again it was way too short.
Anyways, enough with my boring word, keep trying adn i hope you keep these tips on mind for the game you are creating.
James Prankard Inc