Unique and Good
I like you style very much, although I think your dialogue and story could use some work, and things should look alittle less sketchy. Nice job. Loved One Wing Angel as the music by the way.
The graphics kind of sucked tho.
It possesed an interesting style, but wasn't very fluid or all too engaging. The main character just got killed, regenerated, and killed his foe when they weren't ready and then repeated three more times. Like the Madness series, but without the originality or things that made it cool.
one out of five
Definitely a unique style although I don't like having to read all the way through animations. I would also advise you to have someone edit the script because some words are spelled incorrectly and some words are not used as they should be. I gave it a 3 though because it was definitely something I have not seen yet.
Your style was interesting, and I could tell you put a lot of work into that. The gore was great too. If I had to give you advice on what to change for your next one I'd say.... (1) work on cleaning up the drawings a little to get rid of some of the white edges. (2) Make a graphic for the doors too, so they dont stick out as much. (3) Your character needs a weakness. (4) Explain the story a little bit more. (5) your captions were nicely done, but voice actors would be a nice touch (check the NG forums).
Keep up the hard work!