Excellant anime art

Part two of my Arien quest:

I qualify my title Excellant art with the word anime because many people do not considet anime to be excellant but irritating and silly- you have to face that when you look at your reviews and your score on a general-purpose flash animation website. It doesn't mean you shouldn't come here or something if a few people don't like it- you jsut need to bear it in mind.
Again it says in the notes for submission to consider the Alphas for test/previews/teasers and you have blatnetly dumped something which has little entertainment value on its own in as a submission. Again you have got a good score becuase people recognise the skill in the work and wanted to encourage you despite another dreadful title- the kind of thing you call a file in your computer, or maybe in the alphas- not the kind of thing you want when you upload it. Newgrounds is the biggest flash website out there and shiploads of people come here- thye are not your mates popping by to see how you are getting on- that what Devian Tarts do (lol I am one) stat whores come to get stats and the rest come to be entertained, so imagine you are submitting to a cinema!
this time I have not studied your reviews- we are asked not to review others reviews and I risked my reputation to give you advice with the other one.
Trust me- I am on your side, however stroppy I sound!
Best Wishes,
Ice
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One of the best

That is one of the best flashes I have seen in a very long time.
I would like to talk to you about making a game about this. Not a flash game a fully coded game that would look about for the SNES GBA graphics. Email me if you are intrested at evman223@hotmail. com

SWEET...

Hey you know my brother right? If you don't his name is ChaosWolfGod. Or CWG for short. He said I should see this and said I would enjoy it. And guess what... I did!!! You are awesome and should make your own cartoons. Seriously!!! Oh and can you please tell me how to write back after you post something. My brother also wants to know. Oh nad my bro says keep up the good work. Same from me!!! Make the first episode please... and add a little more violence. Okay chow. See ya later.

Just two words..."Flipping Amazing"!!!

This is amazing!!! You draw awesome(I wish I can draw like you) and you have a cool story line that I am looking forward too and the music was also great. But I advise you to work a little more on the action...If you want no one is forcing you but maybe some blood would give this series a boost in violence and some insane scenes. Still good though!!! I'll be starting flash soon!!! I hope my drawings are as good as yours(even though they won't)lol...wish you luck!!! XD WOOT! P.S.- Thanks for the response!

Wow... OK

I have to say it looks like an intreguing series, but it also looks like you got tired after working on it for a long time, and threw this together to try and give yourself a boost to finish with (to hear feedback and get motivation). Well, here's my feedback. The story looks very interesting, and a few points of your frame by frame animation are incredible, however, you've worked so hard to do those little snipets of animation that you've kind of thrown the rest together. I realize this is only a teaser, but I'd suggest storyboarding your work, and creating the entire animation using only the storyboards as visuals the first time through, then fleshing it out with audio, and finally animating the portions that are most important in FBF and the ones that aren't , use slow still frames that don't show mouth movement etc. Best of luck! I'd love to see what you come up with.

-ATT