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Jeff & Maurice

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After varying feedback and hurtful yet constructive criticism, Jeff and Maurice are making a comeback! I have taken negative comments such as 'blam this piece of crap' and 'eat shit you shit eater' and turned it around to create what I feel is my best flash ever!

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Pathetic.

Brilliant. Where am I?

That was a serious piece of mastery

haha. Nothing new, but the graphics are way too low///

not bad

it was an alright short animation. still, i think it could've been a little longer overall though, but it was still a nice little flash nonetheless.

boxpilot responds:

ill make sure the next one is much longer, just for you

Haha, I liked this.

This just goes to show you that simplicity can be a tool in and of itself. Short, sweet, and humorous.

The lack of some sort of musical background, however, hurt the overall style of it a bit. If I were you, I'd add some sort of old-timey, honkytonk piano theme ala old Silent Movies. I'd recommend against voices of any kind, however; the expressiveness of your text is part of what made this for me.

Oh, and by the way; I got the savior animation on your submission, here. Hallelujah!

boxpilot responds:

I thought of the same honkytonk piano when music was first suggested! Thanks for the saving and everything, kind of inspires me to make more..

Good

I like this a lot. I liked the animation. The only bad things was no sound. Even if it had some background music, It would've been a lot better.

boxpilot responds:

glad you liked it, ill really make sure to put in sound next time

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Aug 12, 2005
9:30 AM EDT