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the only thing i found cool was that owl form
this took me about 2 weeks (not really) I quit thwe project for about 10 days...lol any way its an rpg styled fight between a dragon and an owl. yes I know its and odd concept but everyones telling em how much I lack originality. so I made something semi original. please vote good. I want this tobe my best movie yet.
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the only thing i found cool was that owl form
good
i think you should make it longer and it was kinda boring
nice
it was short but sweet and for once the dragon didnt win.
hehehe
it was funny, but i really expected the owl to die, and the way he didn't die well that really doen't leave the dark demon thing much optoins but die, thunderbolt 5569 hp HUGE OWL.
kinda plain
if ur gonna make a turn based battle, tell wat moves the characters are doing. make it a little more interesting. it can stil be turn based but add a bar at the bottem of each character and when its full, that character gets to atk, then another bar, and once that is up, they get a special move. u could also make a little turn based game just to make it look more professinal. the game could be small, just a battle. it would look prefessinal.