uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
weird, i did not undurstand a thing!
Author Comments
Simple showreel showing some characters and things from Web Ninja Pirate's games & animations. I know most people will give it a bad review but meh. I think it's good and i know i could have done much much better but i sorta rushed it but i should stop making excuses so try to enjoy it please without giving me too much negative criticism.
Booo
dont even ask me if i make flashes, I DONT, doesnt mean i dont know the difference between the good, the bad, and the ugly flashes
Atleast you're getting something from us views, i send a picture of it right on this review
0
BLAM
you need work , that was shit
danburton720 responds:
Do you even make flash movies? I would like to see you do better, which you probably will, but i would still like to see you make something decent.
pfft
the animation looks like you arent trying and theres no discernable story
danburton720 responds:
There isn't meant to be a story, it's a random thing with some characters in from the games and animations that I make that you will probably find crap as well.
very crude
you have shown that you have grasped the basics of the flash progaming, you have a good base. However, the problem lies with the presentation, your flash animation look rough round the edge, i saw a problem there. my advise to you, it to rfine your drawing skills a bit, then you will have quality like the famous artists on ng.
As for your plot, it made sense, but the ideas were unconnected, it needed links. You should have charcters relating to eachother, don't have too many charcters in a story and have each one ont be used throughly to tell a story, it wastes time.
Your sound, was awful, i fell you could have done better, it was grainy, and the voiceactors sounded lik they had layingitis. Show some improvement, when yo are recording sounds, make surre you have the mic at least 3-4 cm away form your mouth, you get quality of voice.
You can do better
danburton720 responds:
Ok I just thought i'd let you know that I dont use flash I just use a program called swish which is ok but its very hard to do anything and make anything look good so that's why it looks crap and also what are you talking about? There were no voice actors in that movie
Credits & Info
- Views
- 2,725
- Votes
- 9
- Score
-
3.58 / 5.00
- Uploaded
- Aug 9, 2005
- 10:11 PM EDT