haha
so frikken funny lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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My first flash movie hits newgrounds! :D and with a decent score...
Thank the people who didnt blam this supmission!
XD
I liked it. Really good for your first flash! I look forward to seeing more from you.
InProgress responds:
thank you :) i'm already busy on a new project and i hope to have that finished next week or a week later :)
the skeletons were creepy...
haha..... i was half expecting the girl to have a thought but instead of seeing growing old and having kid, it was gonna be like patying and doing kinky things and then kicking his @$$ out the door..lmao
InProgress responds:
hehe thank you but as a said bevore there were many ways to end this movie. :)
great...
look, ur my pal, and its not that bad, but still:
MAKE THE FREAKING SOUND STREAMING!!!!!
InProgress responds:
i know... i think thats the problem with the sound of the movie.. it starts to early..
you have potential.
here are some things I would improve.
1. for things that aren't going to move seperately, flatten them and put them together. with the thoughts fading in and out, it won't look as bad if you flatten all of it together so it doesn't look weird.
2. add some sound effects.
3. I get the joke, some others may laugh at it, but I'd suggest sneaking in another gag just in case.
InProgress responds:
ok thank you for the tips. :)