A BIT JERKY
THE WHOLE FLASH WAS JERKY BUT IT HAD SOME THOUGHT IN IT, NEEDED SOUND BADLY
Author Comments
After a long while without publishing any short movie, I decided to present this little piece in which I've been working recently. It was previously designed for being used in English classes here in Brazil, but I thought it would be nice to make it public to a wider audience. I think it's not particularly the best piece of my authorship, nor something that I would call inventive. It's a pretty commonplace story, actually. However, I think it's nice - but who am I to rate my own creation, heh? - and I hope you all enjoy it.
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When a tomcat does his business, a man goes insane at the howling and other noise coming from the outside. Obviously you know that sound is very necassary for this movie, and even if it was great would still do quite a number for the it. I love the idea of captions for the characters, especially the red one with all the characters for the man when he screamed, but some sound could of only helped it. Even a mixed garbled song could help. The artwork was not all that bad, with the cat being the stand-out of the bunch. The gun looked really good and was my personal favorite.
The-Chicus responds:
It really needed some sound. You know, by reading all the reviews I noticed that it's crystal clear that the lacuna that sound leaves sets a break in the course of things within the movie.
I plan to fix that for the future.
Thank you for the advice and for the feedback.
cool
it was a pretty cool animation with a neat plot to it and the drawings/backgrounds were very nice, but it really needs some kind of audio.
no sound?
i liked the design n all, especially the little guy n the bed, the outline is awsome, just didn't like the fact there was no sounds.
sound?!
there where no sound... that sucked.. anyway..
it would be perfect whit some relaxin kusic in the background... some anoying cat sounds.. and recording your dad while getting interupted during a footballgame or something..
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