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Jul 28, 2005 | 7:41 PM EDT

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*Update* thankyou very much. Please stay posted. this file was made when i started using flash about 2 month ago. I never got round to finishing it because i started on a new project. I'm halfway through the new project, and thanx to all the reviews I have greatly improved my new flash animation. keep an eye out for "Pretty Baby" coming soon!

This was basically my first try at flash so I'm not too bothered if you think its rubbish or watever. this was my first try, I got kinda bored halfway through so i cud it short. and this is not my full potential, keep posted for more of my stuff.

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blueblowbangblueblowbang

Rated 4 / 5 stars

:P

hmm it seems kinda choppy o.o maybe u can remove sum seconds on the second per frame thingy :P
other than that its GOOD ^-^
love love love



legacy0100legacy0100

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Too emotional!

It just looked like a collection of 'pretty backgrounds' or 'beautiful scenes'. There was no flow in the movie and it lacked a core theme. I took a look at your other submission,' Pretty baby'. At least that one had a theme. You say this isn't your full potential and its only a trailer. Well then study this criticism and make sure you don't make the same mistake on the full version.

I'm sorry if this come out as chauvinistic, but this is the reason why I don't like female flash makers. They prioritize what looks pretty rather than what makes sense. Something is beautiful to look at, then their emotions get in the way and prevent them from doing a good directing job. Not saying all of you are, but it's one of the main feminine characteristics. So a masculine girl (masculine as in personality, not necessarily physically) would do just as good a job directing just like any other men out there I suppose.

Your movies are way too feminine. If you want to be a popular flash artist? then you need to neutralize this and allow both genders to enjoy your movie. Take 'There she is!' for example. A healthy dose of romance and action (the chase scenes).



NomaderNomader

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

A savior... thank the heavens...!

Finally - after sifting through tons of flash, and feeling that most of it was made by no potential authors who say "go easy on it, its my first flash" - I come upon this flash - you can tell that the animations a bit shaky - couldve been better - but no matter, this is one of the better flashes I've seen in the portal. The drawing talent was spectacular - while most of the first time authors you see around here make cruddy stick figures who shoot fake guns... this is talent here- I look forward to the series!


Rinoa-angel responds:

Hey, your review was a real uplifter, Like i was sayin I'm new to flash. You really helped me get a bit of motivation under me! I'll keep up the gd work aslong as u stay as friendly and cool as u seem!:) P.s I'll try my best!


GamingTowelieGamingTowelie

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

dude not bad

i was pretty impressed of this if its your first man ur good but like the last guy said you should have place it bigger like 24 and yeah i give it 3.5 on 5 but ill put it to 4 cuse i rock


Rinoa-angel responds:

thnx, I made the changes. Hopefully u'll keep an eye out for my new project "Pretty baby" am halfway through doing that and am tryin my best 2 make it 100% Under watchful Eyes of Dim and JT From "decline 3" - any more tips Greatly appreciated!


TemariixTemariix

Rated 4 / 5 stars

wow! keep up the good work

great work on the graphics! the sound could have been a bit better as well. and one sugestion, i think you had the frame rate set at 12, it made the fading in and out a bit choppy. next time try 24 or somewhere around there. other than that great job and i cant wait to see the final piece!


Rinoa-angel responds:

heya thnx! I've made improvements 2 the frame rate like you sed. I also added these improvements to my current mini project! hey let me know if you wanna talk on msn messenger! I appreciate the help! :D