Your sense of humor is not very great, but kudos on trying! The video wasn't very in depth and the sound effects were terrible, you may want to consider purchasing some better audio recording equipment. There is a thing called a pop filter which you can position outside a mic to stop plosives from entering its diaphragm.
I'll admit, it's better than some of your other attempts at flash - nowhere near as good as "Raven", however. Still, not bad for a quick laugh. I'm giving you higher points for "Style" now, since I recognize your trademark animation style, your tendency to use gags, and your trademark "Darn, that's the end" sound byte.
Good work. I'm still watchin' ya ;)
I'm glad you are. Your reviews are helpful.
ok......that woz a ok short one pretty funny but gets a bit borein. and dont understnad why he ad to call it dat?
The graphics were bearable, they were really bland, try adding detail. There are also pauses between screen changes. The audio wasn't so great either, tell -Jade- not to hold the mic so close. The draw of this flash was obviously the humor and you got a laugh out of me. Good Job