The Result of Negligence was my first flash, and due to my newbiness that may or may not still be present within me caused several errors in the final product, I took a little bit of time to clean it up and try to fix some things to make it look closer to the way I wanted it to be; please continue to be open minded with any mistakes you see present, it was, after all, my first completed flash project. Special thanks to On Broken Wings for creating their works of beautiful devastation. Music by On Broken Wings, Eulogy Recordings.
I would also like to mention that it has a large file size, as I wanted to keep the music quality relatively high, as the music is half, if not more than half of the movie.
Enjoy.
You know I love it
Hey sweetie. Wanted ot say, if I didn't already, I love it! James, as always, is so beautiful (if a bit dark), and you know that is exactly how I have loved him forever! Any way, I wanted to put this on here to show you that I really did enjoy it. I loved the whole thing. Thank you for sharing this with me.
Yeah whatever.
hmm
The music was really good. Nice work with showing different perspectives. Very nice style to it.. blood and tears.. and more blood. more blood the better. violence is the best way to go. That was so cool how that kid mutated like that. you did a nice job.
interesting, needs some refining
I like the style of it with the use of simple lines and color to make impact. I think many of the shots need to be upcut to shorten them. It's amazing what shaving a couple of frames or even seconds off a shot can do to the whole piece. The music started off really well and fit with what was happening; that is until the vocals kicked in, what is that guys problem? I would seriously consider trying to filter out the vocals on that song somehow, they made me want to turn the whole thing off just so I wouldn't have to hear the mindless yelling anymore. All in all, I liked, needs some tuning up, but enjoyable none the less.
Yes, as I stated, it was my first completed flash, and in the revisited version, I tuned it up as much as I plan to. And no, I'm not going to try to filter out the vocals. The music and the vocals hold the spirit of the point and feeling that I'm trying to get across. "What is that guy's problem?" His problems may or may not be my problems. Having said all that, I'm not trying to be some emokid who's always trying to act like he has some huge mellow dramatic issue just so he can have some attention. At the time I made this flash I -did- have a large problem on my hands, and had no other way of relieving myself aside from producing this flash. Aside from all that, thank you for your constructive review; I won't be tuning up this animation anymore, but I will always strive to produce better and better animation in the future.
P.s. Check out my latest animation, even if it is broken.
TRON
Okay not exactly what i was expecting, where does Tron fit in here.
Am i missing something here. By the way i did like it anyways!
Glad you liked it, I put quite a bit of effort into it. I know the acronym "tRoN" is really bad, but it stands for "the Result of Negligence" (I tried to express that by use of lower case and capital letters, but haha!, it just made it look 1337-ish!), so that's all that you missed.
great
that was good, odd but good