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Bag Boy: Episode 1

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Keep in mind that this was my very first flashtoon, graphics suck, and there is some paper rustle in the audio. We spent only a few hours on this but have learned a lot fom it.

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nice!

Damn, this sounds a lot like me and my friends making recordings at 1-2 in the morning. funny and good.

alright

some paperbag dude telling a story. I guess this has never been done before. The voice acting could have been better... but it isn't bad. "i'm in it for the bitches" hahah. I really like the lined paper background. As this movie went on it got better. Definitely kept me interested. I like the timberlake impression and the alien ship. very nice stuff.

Oneity-EightThree responds:

I think the voice could have been better too, we started it late at night and finished it 7 hours later so we we're kind of tired. We've gotten better with that...

Could become a pretty cool series

Well this looked quite promising. Maybe it'll become a pretty popular series in the future. You submitted episode 2 before this one, right? Would be better if you submitted this one first, but meh who cares? Anyway, here are a couple of suggestions that might make this a bit better.

One: You should add some subtitles. I could hear Bag Boy pretty good, but I could barely hear what Justin was saying. Just make some kinda box where the text is so that it's not diffecult to read or something like that. Two: You need to work a bit on the graphics. They were kinda average and if you want this to get a very high score, you have to draw better. Three: Well there wasn't really that much going on in this episode. In my opinion, it was a little bit boring. I hope the next episodes will be a bit more interesting and a bit longer.

Overall I'd give this 5 out of 10, 2 out of 5. It was a kinda average movie, but it was pretty original I think. I haven't seen anything like this before actually. I hope you'll improve on your drawings and that more stuff will happen in future episodes. It could become a pretty cool series like I said before. So put a bit more work in it and good luck with making all the other episodes.

~Auz

Oneity-EightThree responds:

Yes we did submit ep2 before this one. We thought it to be better, but I like the simplicity of this one so I decided to add it aswell. We have three future Bag Boy scripts written already, and I'm ordering one of those Wacom drawing tablets so we'll be stepping up a bit in the near future. Thank you for the pointers, we'll be sure to consider what you've said when we work on episode 3.

Original sketches

I am only blamming you because of technical reasons, but I have to say that this character is an original. Dont give up on this one, just get better at flash and I know this character will be great!
So just get better!

Oneity-EightThree responds:

Can you be more specifc on technical reasons so we can improve on future episodes (or even revisitng this one).

Truly a below sub-par flash work.

THe sound was off, there was no lip synch at all, and the alien was distracting. Seriously though, I know you can do better, so come back with it once you've worked on it more... till then, I'm blamming this version.

Oneity-EightThree responds:

I don't mean to be rude or anything but in my defense the audio is fine. I have tested it on about 3 pc's and everything matches up perfectly, maybe your computer was just going through some heavy processing at the time... It happens, anywho, thank you for being honest.