ou have Developed something interesting here, So with a flick like this I can see changes make this better but sofar you have all grounds covered and whatnot. you have Earned some credit with thsi reviewer. So this was pretty decent a good quality of scenes here and nice story you have going on, art and characters are welldone love the use of color here and some good action here.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more to this story you have something good here.