how very average
Sorry, but this story was uninspired, as was the music, as was the animation. all of which are in a style very familiar to newgrounds already, and in the case of the music, familiar to PC games circa 1993. You are on the right track here, except for the fact that your story telling needs some work. I saw the end punchline coming as soon as the turtle was born. I think you were trying to do something weird, but fell short in the long run. Please understand I don't mean to offend in any way at all. I am only trying to offer constructive criticism, unlike a lot of people here on newgrounds.