Good
Well, i could not tell how was the preloader because it did not talke any time to load. But, over all, i liked it. Keep up the work.
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to start, HELP! im new at flash, and i wanetd to add a sound loop. i got one from flashkit, but i dont know how to add in a flashtrack in .swf. please help! >_<
so ya, i hope the preloader works. if it doesnt ill try to fix it. im new at this so i might have screwed it up.
this was an entry for www.mairuku.deviantart.c
om 's contest. its just a little thing with 2 characters in her upcoming comic.
anyways, dont be too harsh, im new! ;p
if you like it, visit my site www.isays.deviantart.com
thanks ^_^
i-says responds:
thanks ^__^
tight
that was awesome. Only thing is music. After you get that you all good for a series.
i-says responds:
ya, i posted on newgrounds hoping someone could help me with the music lol. i got a flashtrack, but it doesnt work like adding in mp3 sound, i dont know how to add it in lol.
i rekon it needed alot of work
i think instead of doing a smaller one and then say coming soon you should do the whole thing, it would be much better cause all we saw was 2 blank faced people firing electricty at each other. If you want to make a good violence movie and then make it into a series then watch bunnykill or madness combat!
i-says responds:
hmmm, apperently you didnt read my comment about it. about how its not a series, its just a contest entry. secondly madness doesnt even HAVE a face, so dont say anything about being blank faced. also its not frame by frame. bunnykill only had eyes, and they showed no emotion, and it, too, wasnt frame by frame.
it wasnt supposed to be a violence movie, it was supposed to be a little trailer for my friend's webcomic and a contest entry. it wasnt supposed to be like madness or bunnykill, because that would be copying them.
i know i need work but try some helpful critique, and if youre going to refer me to some work, atleast make it the same kind of work.
Was This A Frame By Frame?
Anyway, it was an average entry for newgrounds.For your flash animation, it was sensational. You should use music in your movies and i wide multiplicity of sound effects. The graphics were fine i like your sense of drawing style, it looks like how the japanese draw(Tell Me If Its Wrong)The ability to see that sort of fighting, in this movie, makes me wonder, Will this movie have a sequel? Will these two alchemy(magic) humans fight once more? I don't know, You tell me.Moving On, as I've said before average for Newgrounds and sensational for your first. There is nothing in this review that will get you down. Im looking foward to the next one!
*~MeanClock~*
i-says responds:
ya, it was frame by frame ;p
i tried to put music in, but i couldnt get it working, i was hoping people here on NG could help me lol.
no, they wont fight again. well, not by me anyways lol. this was a contest entry, they will be in my friend's webcomic, and much better drawn ;p.
thanks for your comment ^_^
pretty decent
i am not too much into trailers..but this one was decent ...if this is your first flash it´s really good...i like your style and look forward to see more from you...seems like there is finally hope for newgrounds future...thanxs dude =)
i-says responds:
lol thanks;p
ya, im just starting, and DAMN frame by frame animation takes forever :'(
especially with color and trying to take lighting into acount. maybe i should just drop the frame rate and not shade, like vinnie.... damn vinnie is just too good >_< lol.
oh, btw, its not a trailer for me, its for my friend's webcomic lol. i just made it as a contest entry lol
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