it would make a decent series,

But if you are going to make a flash from this pilot: 1, make it longer (obviously)/ 2, add voice acting/ 3, don't give the characters more depth, they all looked very similar

((( SHORT )))

It was a bit too short, but it was still pretty good, i like the style in this the most, and your characters look pretty cool, you have nice drawing skills. The animations are smooth, and detailed, and you did a great job on the violence. There was not much story since it was only a first scene, but i hope to see more soon, because it did look really cool...

~X~

Wow

that was very good. I liked the presepective amd everything

props to you

I'll be watching as soon as you make.
Looks real good!

slick pilot/trailer

It seems that you know what ur doing with ur visuals. I mean, as several reviewers have mentioned, you have slick graphics and smoothly refined movement. I'm jealous hehe.. But seriously, A big window of success awaits you - if you have patience. Yep. Patience to come up with an original, inventive & exciting storyline. Remember to keep all featured events consistent and purposeful. Good luck to you mister