pretty good for your first episode
the overall humour is good. animation is alright. fix up the drawing a bit. AND DON'T WORRY. I KNOW THAT IT'S NOT SUPPOSED TO MAKE SENSE . (damn all those other halfwits that need an "oscar-worthy" script..especially on newgrounds of all places. duh.) anyhoooo. good luck with your future cartoons. who knows, if you're lucky, maybe i'll write an episode or two for you. :-P
- Absynthe.