Nice job with expressions. It would be nice to see a "When guts man attacks" ha.
Hamsteroncrack. I'm not one of those all caps yellers but here is what I have to say.
Here is the definition I got from Webster on contraption.
"Etymology: perhaps blend of contrivance, trap, and invention
: DEVICE, GADGET"
It fits rather well in Quick mans situation.
Then just because the author makes one spelling error doesn't mean it should be included in the overall score. Not everyone can spell every word correctly because the English language has over three thousand words in it.
Did you go to a Microsoft Word document and spell reign wrong, let it correct it for you, copied, and pasted it into your review? Because Microsoft Word always capitalizes your first letter when you leave the word.
Right, this isn't a true review. But people who have a bad profile who mock flashes when they can't even make their own just need a realization :P