Very nice
I must say that was go the movement of the character was badly done. But your story plotline seems to be a start of someting really good. Keeping going, you're going great. Just working on your work and you'll be prefect!
Im planning to make this into a series so this trailer will give the audience a preview on how it would look like. Please also add comments. Thanks!
Very nice
I must say that was go the movement of the character was badly done. But your story plotline seems to be a start of someting really good. Keeping going, you're going great. Just working on your work and you'll be prefect!
good
like the last review it was a bit choppy but good
Not bad
It's a bit choppy but in all not bad
Need work
Your drawing style could use some work. You looked like you were going good with the "hero" figure, but it looks like you started to half ass it with the "villian" figure. Also try studying the motion of the body. I may not make flash videos but I am a comic artist. and the way you had the running frames it looked all choppy, the motions don't flow right. You got a good idea here. Feel free to email me and I could probably help you with the drawing. ^_^ but hey you gave it a good shot. Also as a former band member the music didn't seem to sync up with the animation. Again, please email me if you see this.
Wait Wait Wait...
If this anime drawing styels... take a few lessons. Im no pro but at least i know how to make a guy look different from a girl. And no... short skirts and T&A is not the answer my friends! No offense but im begging you, plz, take both flash and drawing lesons before Who am I? comes out. More like What Gender am I? Change the style or learn to draw it better PLZ. Your good but you draw tranny guys(i think thats what that was?).