EgoCity Chap V disk1

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Took me 4months for this lol. It's about 10mins long so grab some drinks. This is part 1 outta 2 of my final chapter of EgoCity. Part 2 will be out at the end of this year.


The only reason...

The only reason i didn't give you an overall score of TEN was because you had horrible voice actors. HORRIBLE voice actors. It was all so good until i heard their voices.


Well i've got good news and bad news. the bad news is that your voice dubbing sux. and if it was you who did it, you have a horrible lisp. find somebody that is easier to understand and can actually talk. I also didn't like the DBZ-like influence. some of it was alright, but with the spirit bomb thing, that was just too much. so change that.

on a good point, i love you drawing style, im an artist myself and the way you draw is very very nice. so keep up the artistic look.

I would give this movie a ten, however becuz of the DBZ-ness and the lisp/dubbing, i have to give it an 8. but i cant wait till the next one comes.

LenZ responds:

Just to point out, that DBZ is all looping fighting and I did some w/ frame by frame. 2) Okay so I did some spirit bomb, but they done take that long. But thanx for reviewing it.

great but not perfect (but what is)

very good... not one of ur best *cough cough* EC3 *cough* but its a ton better than i could do, very great story and good details with your slight cgi graphics i think i can notice

Good, but...

You seem to have talent. Quite a bit of it, actually. So why rely on a combination of Final Fantasy, Dragonball, and the Matrix to come up with a plot? Use your talents for something truely original. You can only get so far by riding on the shoulders of those who came before you. Take it one step further and you become a king.


well... the movie wasn't soo smooth, it was hard to see what's going on, it like, jumped from one part to the other and i didn't see what was going on. except for that the movie was kinda cool, all those energy ball thingys were nice and i hope u'll make other flashes smoother and with clear movements.

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4.21 / 5.00

Jun 26, 2005
6:56 PM EDT