I truly do enjoy your works Vince. I am one of the ones still awaiting part 15 of the day after. I would like to say that this flash isn't one of your strongest though. Here's a few suggestions if you'd ever want to redo it:
Killing MoogleSlayer: Show a greater portion of him geting killed. Also when you drag him off screen have things like "Hey!? What're you doing!? *Sound of lightsaber* *Moogleslayer laighing nervously* Uhm...Truce? You..are..better? OMG NOOO *Sounds of lightsaber slashing and ends with three gunshots*
Shin2k27: Older voice was better. It was far more funy to listen to. I suggest a joke about how he slaps as an attack. What kind of man slaps? And maybe a blind attack using his bald head.
Darth Vader Scene: Have him be like NOOOOOOooooo and pan out then have him clutch his side and the scene zoom back in quickly while having him say "What the fuck...I think all the constipated screaming caused a hernia." -End Scene-
Those are just my suggestions. If youd like to hear more for future flashes just message me. I write scripts and such in my free time.