dear heavens

Nice 1st flash!

Work some more and youll be great someday! But the graphics... work on them. The sound too...

funny? please.

this did not make sense, graphics poor, sound poor, animation horrific, humor gay. this sucked. i think stormbreaker1 was smoking something really strong when he said this was funny. good for a beginner, but first make something like this, but don't put it on the site. keep it on ur computer and make something good. when you honestly think it will survive, then u put it on the site.

W000t

This thing is hilarious!!! The voices are great ! Ic couldn't sotp laughing when I saw this!

What is this ?

Dude, what is this ?
Seriously, how long did you work on this ? 5 minutes ?
The graphics are crappy, the voices (done yourself, i guess) are badly integrated (did you use and old tape recorder ?)
I was waiting for the funny clue, bat when the movie was finished, i was still waiting.
You need to improve your effort. Spend some more time in the graphics, make it run more smoothly, work a bit (Sorry, a lot) on the sounds, and try to extend the story to something that is actually funny, not something that might be a little bit funny when you're drunk.
With effort, you can produce something much better then this.