This episode was somewhat hastily made, but I kept the sound effects at a level somewhat higher then the first. You may have to turn your volume up some to hear it well. The next one will be longer and more interesting... I hope.
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You gave this entry a 5, raising its score to 2.33!
Woo. Go you. I liked it. But yeah, the sound is a bit.. not so good :P. Try making message bubbles or so, more understandable aswell. But part 1 was funnier :P. Seeing it's all about the humour and stuff I wonder why people even bother complaining about the graphics.
Ah-hem
Whether your little bitch or not, I always like hearing you explain things you're gonna make while my little goat like mind plays plays old Bosko cartoons in my head, see because now this seems very funny and you know what, no one else has given this one a good score yet and well... IT SO DESERVES A FRIGGIN TEN AND A FIVE AND STUFF! Because well, I love you and you really owe me for finding all your work God-like... ( ;) ) heh heh heh...
Hmm Wierd
Not very good at all. Keep your mouth further away from the microphone dammit! its so fuzzy it sounds like your talking into a towel. Very unusual. Next time actually think what its going to be based on. Plan ahead! That just might help!
Actually, I did plan what it would be based on, even wrote it out before hand, it's just that my mind is so warped and fragmented that, well, this movie seemed logical and funny.
Room for improvement...
heres a peice of advice: Try to keep your mouth a little farther away from the microphone, it sounds as if you are glued to one and you frequently pop it, that should fix part of the quality issue. Other than that, good work.
Yeah, I'm still sorting out how to work my shitty old mic. Hopefully next time it will work a bit better.... thanks for the advice.
WHATS WRONG J
I'll tell you whats qrong that is one of the worst entries in to the portal i have seen it was not funny had no plot just some mental patent in a room talking to flying circle things it was bad!!!
Watch the first episode, that may help illuminate you. If that fails, read on as I explain. The joke in this entry is that he is NOT a mental patient, he is a normal child who has been forced to visit a summer camp. The summer camp turns out to be nothing more then a cell with a slot in the door. Many children hate their summer camps and think they are going crazy. The humor is, this one has.