I LIKED IT . . . . . BUT

Why did the animation last for 35 seconds, and the music lasted for 4 and a half minutes. . . with a blank screen. You should have edited down the music to suit the animation.

Very creative, hey, it's fresh.

Check this out! Smooth animation with a world that exists line by line, and you get, ta da! a linear world. This is very good stuff for a first-time submission. Keep up the good work Jamie.

Very slick

Now that's a really good idea- I can't remember anyone doing anything like that here before. As the other dude said, it could have been longer, but I really liked how it was done. Keep 'em coming; if you decide to make another with the same method, try it in 3D ;)

I liked the music.

not bad. Could of been longer, at least till the song was done.

Not to shabby

Wow that was pretty good for your fist animation with flash. You are a very promising prospect for the future of falsh. All i can say is keep practicing.