Pretty good.
Not too bad.
Need to work a bit more on the dialouge, like, how you spell certain words, and the general wording of sentences.
Try to make them flow a bit better.
The artwork is briliant though.
Good music choice as well.
Author Comments
You remember Jonny Boy? the first minute long film about a guys fuck up?
I decided to dedicate my time on a series. then i thought fuck it. i made 5 episodes, but i thought, why not make it a short movie. Heres Jonny Boy, the full story. this took ages, no shit. and i think its my best work. what do you think?
cheers
-nbh/haris
www.08dream.co.uk
((( VERY GOOD )))
Wow i was very impressed with this from start to finish, the "COMIC" style was great and when you started it off with the gun shot very nice, the "ARTWORK" was just as good, but could use more animating but very nice stuff you have here so keep at it and i hope to see more soon...
~X~
This is down right the best flash movie
It is perfect in every way shape and form there is absulaty nothing better you can do with it you are a flash god and I dont throw that term around lightly
Amazing, a true work of art.
I have never seen anything like this one newgrounds. The story, the animation, the pure style of the way everything was done. I loved it. The music was awsome too. I heard some Gorillaz in there. I can't wait to see your next movie, but it will be hard to top this. Keep up the excellent work!
_-_Kevin_-_
Amazing
This is one of the best flash movies that i have ever seen, straight into my favourites.