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Nice!

Best movie so far of the ones you've created/submittet, in my opinion at least. Good plot combined with nice and simple animation. Would be nice with a little color, but otherwise it's all good, keep it up!

-cd-

Very cool!

^^Good Points^^
In my opinion, this is the best movie you've made to date. The storyline was really cool, it's a very original idea for a life store. The ending was sad, but I think it teaches a valuable lesson. The song was also an excellent choice, since it changed tone and mood at the exact right time.

^^Needs Improving^^
The drawings were very sloppy. I really couldn't make out the drawings in the first scene. This could use lots of revamping in graphics, mainly drawings.

((( NICE )))

Wow that was a really good story, i like how he wanted to have a lolly pop, and life so he tried to get both of them at once, and the end was really interesting, and a little sad. The animations is good, but this could have used some color to make it better, and some more detail, but it was still really well done...

~X~

Wow...

I agree with the only other review I can read. This is so close to the edge, I can't say what'll happen.

I protected you. It's simple and sketchy, but it's complete, and it gets the job done effectively.

listen

you walked a fine razors edge. a little less in the production, it wouldv'e sucked. A little more on the graphics, it would've been great. so that's that

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1,501
Votes
11
Score
3.02 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jun 17, 2005
9:01 PM EDT