ok...

that was wierd and very expected, but it was ok.
PS. you should use diffrent Speakonia voices, it gets a 4 from me

Hmmmmm.............................

The voices were way too fucking fast!

Hm

Well you DEFINATELY need to make your speakonia voices faster, they are way too slow.

Working on the animation will help too, the way the characters moved was somewhat awkward.

I like how you put breadfruit clock in there, but instead of drawing your own (some of which did not look so good), find some already made flash files of clocks to use in your movies.

As for scripts, the story in this one was decent but it could use a little work. The dot dot dot part actually made me chuckle though.

Not good.

The graphics fucking sucked, and the animation was awful. Oh well, better luck next time, keep practicing flash and you'll get good at it. Its a start.

Good start

I really wanted to dislike this but the silly cameral angles joke made me laugh. this is a basic flash but with more work there's room for improvement. :-))